"VERY cool!"

"Haha, this is scary. But good example of flash+ambient."

"Also blurry, unfortunately. A 1-second exposure is very unlikely to work."

"Oops, blurry! I think your camera focused on the background and/or 1/6s exposure was too long and your subject moved a bit."

"Close, but you were pointing the camera down this time so there's a vertical vanishing point below the photo! Notice how the columns aren't parallel."