"Again I like the depth that is created."

"I really like this one. The depth of it is great and I love the green mark that is not like all the others."

"this is powerful!"

"PC 9/1: Drk areas and sm/lrg marks give it nice depth. ?thin line weaving thru painting in, out, and around a few shapes-maybe just a line coming in and wandering deep into the space or maybe just some shorter lines way back in space? Is the big beige shape interfering with the lovely floating shapes? Big beige looks like it wants to become an object (heaven forbid!) Does there need to be a middle sized shape to step from the violet shapes to the big beige one? Or does BB just need to go? Almost a triad?."

"9/1 (PC): Starting to work-?Cont bl to btm right--looking down on fog, seeing bits of land peeking out. ?you already see that...blue is already appearing in the btm rt quad. Value change of bl and orng: intro a lt src (reflections on H20?) Keep clr scheme rich and it has potential to pulse. ?Reach further into both sides of the clr whl-both reds and blues. Don’t let it get pasty. Cut into shapes starting to form; keep it open so eye flows w/out interruption. Blk=nap crimson+quin violet+touch of phthblue"