"Wow!  This is Trinae @ Sankofa Math Conference @ Morris Brown!"

"This is great."

"I like the art/artist correlation. Great eye guidance toward the point."

"Dad, if you do use the blurb about the artists' pain, I think it would be good to add an exclamation mark after "flowing." It adds a more playful attitude, for me."

"I like this one as well. I like the in depth description under Mom's picture. I think the blurb about the artists pain is a bit much. lol. - and maybe it would be more effective to have a picture of someone really stressed out with paperwork, money, reciepts...if you have one, rather than a picture of body pain. From afar I think it could be misleading. Nice work, Dad."