"+Joshua Russo Thanks for the comments on this image. yo are correct this image does have a soft focus thanks to 1.8 and shaky hands. Your Critiques are fine. the more information the better. As long a you are not getting personal with your critique, such as "that is the ugliest person on the planet" then I will accept all critique. I also try to try out all suggestions even if I don't update the image online I do try different version to see the outcome."
"+Joshua Russo Thanks for the critique She was under a tree in the shade but the tree had way to many breaks in the foliage and was bleeding in bright streaks across her face, so I used a diffuser above her to shade her some. other than that it is all natural light. you can see the hot spots on the foliage just behind her.
I went in and brightened the eyes a bit, but I cant get them the way I want them. She is like me and has really dark brown eyes, and because I see her everyday they look a little off when I lighten them up. I did crop out her fingers and did a little contrast adjustment. If I get the eyes to look natural I will upload an edited version.
Also, you did read it correctly. these where impromptu shots in the middle of the day so I wanted to get as much feed back as possible."